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Broken trees clustered
into a wall
tall and slender
Green.


Except for

One—short and thick
bent over its feet
red leaves
Falling.
©2008-2009 ~1love1jesus
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Don't ask what the title has to do with the poem, I have no clue. So I got a book called Poemcrazy for Christmas and one of the exercise was write a poem like your pen was dictating, and this is what came out.

Any crits?

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